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Bonsoir, pouvez-vous me corriger svp ? Je dois inventer la 4ème de couverture d'un roman policier et je dois l'écrire au PRETERIT, dois-je rajouter encore des choses ?
Merci pour votre aide

It happended several years ago, near a small town, located of California.
For several months, a serial killer has been making troubles in this city usually so calm and peaceful.
Every day, without exception, was found bodies of dead girls, patients of Dr Smith were found.The investigators suspected this doctor, however much loved by its inhabitants.
The habitants were completely terrorized.The mystery reigned over the city...
Is it really Dr Smith who did this? Anyone else trying to pin it on him?

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    It happened several years ago, near a small town, located in California.

    For several months, a serial killer has been making trouble in this city usually so calm and peaceful.

    Every day, without exception, was found bodies of dead girls, patients of Dr. Smith were found. The investigators suspected this doctor, however much loved by its inhabitants.

    The inhabitants were completely terrorized. The mystery reigned over the city...

    Is it really Dr. Smith who did this? Anyone else trying to pin it on him?

    Des mots que j'ai corrigés : happended, of California, troubles, The habitants, Dr

    J'espère que cela vous a aidé !

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