bonsoir a tous, Je dois raconter mes dernière vacances et utiliser des verbes reguliers et irréguliers à la forme négative et interrogative ,pouvez vous corrige

bonsoir a tous,
Je dois raconter mes dernière vacances et utiliser des verbes reguliers et irréguliers à la forme négative et interrogative,pouvez vous corriger mon travail merci.



During my holiday
i went to see my grandparents.

How I went?

I did not
take the car but I took the train.

What have I
visited during my week?

I visited a
zoo, the lions did not sleep, they did not fight, there were  lots of animals and of exotics birds. The afternoon i went to
sea but I did not  swim because the water
was too cold. i fished but I did not catch fish and I did not find the sea
shell.

In
the evening, I was going to walk in town.

When
we arrived  what smell did we feed and
what did we hear?

I
smell the odor of waffles, pancakes and we heard the musicians played their
instruments.

 I bought ice creams .

What
perfume I preferred ?

I
preferred vanilla.

It
was a holiday too short but unforgettable.