Bonjour pouvez vous me corriger svp later i would like to work in human resources in a hospital setting. the main tasks of this profession are personnel managem
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Bonjour pouvez vous me corriger svp
later i would like to work in human resources in a hospital setting.
the main tasks of this profession are personnel management, recruitment, establish payslip
I would like to work in human resources because I am passionate about this profession. I like being versatile.
I chose the hospital environment because helping sick people is important to me. It is close to my heart.
I am serious by nature applied in my work I think I have the necessary qualities to do this job.
later i would like to work in human resources in a hospital setting.
the main tasks of this profession are personnel management, recruitment, establish payslip
I would like to work in human resources because I am passionate about this profession. I like being versatile.
I chose the hospital environment because helping sick people is important to me. It is close to my heart.
I am serious by nature applied in my work I think I have the necessary qualities to do this job.
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1. Réponse cass2108
Je pense que tu as tout juste mais que tu peux modifier ta derniere phrase en disant : I am naturally serious, applied in my work so i think i have the necessary qualities for this job. Et a ton avant derniere phrase c'est un peu bizzare que tu dises c'est proche de mon coeur, comme tu as deja dis c'est important pour moi je pense que tu peux le supprimer apres a toi de voir.